Thursday, June 16, 2011

NEW NAME!!!


I have a new name for my book and it is....drum roll please....Silenced by the Rain! Just thought of it now while I was writing the conclusion which is amazing too.

 Anyway my life has been great, I just finished Passion by Lauren Kate. It was breathtaking I insist that you all go out to read it! I also might be starting from scratch with my book, I don't know yet. I think I might write a few more chapters before I start to rewrite:/ *strugs* Oh! Another thing the picture that I put of the turtle charm was pretty cute I thought, guess where I saw it. In my friend's car! And on the under belly was a heart! Is it destiny or what?

Another Cookie!

Here is a glimpse of the upcoming chapter:)

"You know my mother would always tell me to treat others the way you want to be treated, but I don't get it because I treat others like shit but yet im treated like a queen."

Monday, June 13, 2011

Chapter 2

Here is chapter 2 sorry it took so long, hope you like it!

Chapter 2
I stormed into the house I couldn’t stop thinking about Asher. What is his problem? Is he really just that much of an ass?  
“Hi blue jay” my grandma exclaimed jarring me from my thoughts.
“Grandma!” I ran to her giving her my best of hugs. I should of known she was home from the smell of old Irish cooking.
“I missed you” she said into my hair.
“I missed you too” I pulled away and gave her a kiss on her fore head. Every time she calls me blue jay makes me forget the negative in my life. Asher. Of course the one person I do want to forget, I just can’t get him out of my mind. Why is he just so…alluring. Just don’t think of him Skye.
“Oh Lordy Lord, have you’ve grown.” She say looking my up and down.
“Oh Lordy Lord have you’ve shrunk.” I say putting on my best Irish accent. We both laugh, I go into a hug once more. “ I really love you Grandma”
“I love you too my little blue jay, now come on, let us join the family and have us some dinner.”
I followed her to the dinner room table just to find my brothers and father talking with Asher. While my sister and mother were off on the side drooling over him. “Skyler come meet this handsome young man we can now proudly call our neighbor.” My mother said looking at him like he was the sun and we were all expected to dance circles around him.  
“We’ve met” I said bitterly, rolling my eyes.
“That’s extremely rude, say you’re sorry Skye.” My father demanded staring at me sternly.
I stood there unbelieving that he just treated me like a small child, “I don’t think so, I scoffed, walking straight up to my room, might as well save them the breath of telling me to go up to my room. I looked back just to find that Asher wore that stupid grin of his. He looked up at me with a face of satisfaction. I ran to my room and slammed the door I jumped into the sea of pillows and multi colored quilts. My room was my garden, my heaven, and nobody is allowed in it unless I say so. I’ve spent years drawing the different flowers all over my room, no flower was the same. My room was the only room with a deck, it was small but big enough for me to wake up in the morning and draw God’s rising smile. There is an oak tree right next to my deck that I’ve used more than once to sneak out of. I only had one drooping chandelier as my lighting, the rest were candles. I heard my mother pounding at my door screaming at me to come out, but I didn’t care.
I lay down on my bed looking up at the ceiling. My eyes were gently getting heavier, I haven’t had a full nights rest for months I said it so quietly as almost as a prayer for God to help me sleep through the night. That was unlikely, if God didn’t help the millions of people that were dying and starving I highly doubted he would help me. The room began to swirl and the pounding at the door began to fade, and I was asleep and dreaming.
I was walking the ancient streets of a little village in China. My hair was a silky black, I had the eyes and wisdom of the tiger. I had a petite body but I felt as if I was strong, stronger than any normal human could be. I wore peasant clothes and in my arms I held a basket of rice. I walked toward a little hut upon a small hill in the corner of my eyes I looked upon the emperor’s men depriving a woman of her son, no older than twelve. I could not see the woman’s face for she was turned around. But the young boy had chestnut hair with soft grey eyes. The boy only shed a single tear, but that tear might as well have been a dagger shredding my heart to pieces. I then realized that the woman was my mother and that boy was my brother. I dropped the basket and ran to them, trying to hold in the tears that I knew one day would come. When I got there they were speaking Chinese but I strangely knew what they were saying.
“Oh, Hou! Please tell them to go away, tell them this is a mistake” my mother said between sobs her soft grey eyes pleading with me.                
I stood up straight looking straight into the haughty man’s eyes “this boy is only at the age of twelve, he cannot kill or hunt, or even read! The emperor will not need his services.”
“Step aside you filthy slave”, he pushed me to the ground and ripped my brother from mothers clutches.
“Ju!” my mother and I cried out ready for the worst.
Stepping into the man’s path was Fai my guardian, my love. Did I love him? It was the question I’ve been asking for days. The answer? Yes. I dare not say the words out loud for it would be the beginning of something I am not ready to face. His white hair was blazing as was his blue eyes as he ripped out his sanmei.  
“Let the boy go or I’ll kill you” he snarled pointing the sword at the man’s nose.
The man barked a laugh. “You would kill a man of the emperor, boy? And serve a punishment of death?”
“I’ll take my chances” Fai declared spitting on his face.
 The man broke out his swords slashing Fai across the face. I couldn’t help but gasp in the horror of his blood drip from his face.
“How dare you touch me! You damned fool!” the man swore.
Fai fought back as if nothing had happen. Swords were mixed with swords, the sound when the swords kissed was like a lightning bolt being shot forth the sky. Fai got knocked to the ground. Get up I begged. Fai lay upon the ground looking up at me with sorrow. I looked away ready for whatever was going or not going to happened, then in one heart beat the emperor’s man was on the ground with Fai’s sword struck through his heart. I watched as his soul to flight, ready for the hell it was about to go through. In the man’s dying breath he shot a dart right at my brother’s chest. I caught him right as he fell, he choked on the blood dripping from his mouth. Fai ran to me pleading for me to forgive him, my mother was screaming at the winds for mercy. I heard and saw nothing but Ju, he looked up at me with a peacefulness I will never understand. He reached into his pocket to pull out something, he opened his fist and with his last remaining breath he choked out the words “turtle.” In his open palm he eld a small green turtle for my charm bracelet, he got it for me for my birthday I figured. I could not take it no longer! I ran towards the woods, I exploding letting out all the power I held inside for so long. The storms started brewing, and the trees shook with as much anger as I held in my body, I threw rocks and boulders across the forest. My hair was flying around my body like a nest of untamed animals. The winds started to get stronger, as I looked down at the village the huts were being torn from the ground and shot to the heavens. Families were gathering around to run to safety. Mothers were holding their children, all but one, my own mother. I then started to cry and the storm got heavier, I balled my hand into fist and the ground shook with anger and sadness.
“Stop this,” Fai whispered unballing my fist so he could take them into his own hands. He grabbed my chin forcing me to look at him, and in one clean movement he kissed me gently. I pulled back looking into his eyes, we were both scarred. Oh but we both wanted it with a passion unlike no other. I took him by the hair and pulled him to me with such intensity that either of us could hardly breathe. The world fell away, nothing mattered but us, not my mother, not my brother, not the chaos of the people at the village, and most certainly not my death. We pulled apart and with our eyes closed we both murmured “I love you.” When I opened my eyes a thousand kisses, a thousand deaths, a thousand poisoned loves shot through my head. At the same moment a bolt of lightning shot through the sky, and with it an archangel. The same archangel that comes and rips us apart every time.
We clawed at each other not willing to go down without a fight. In one step he was in front of us gripping me from the arm and throwing me into a tree. The last thing I remembered before blacking out was the faint cried of Fai crying for the archangel to let him go. When I awoke from my slumber the storm seemed to settle, I looked around in a daze. I was sitting in something warm and wet; I brought the strange substance to face to examine it just to realize it was blood. I checked my body looking for wounds, I had none but there was a body next to me. It was a boy, a boy with white hair.
“No! Oh please don’t do this to me! I clawed at him, his eyes that were once filled with compassion and love are now just mirrors, reflected the pain on my face. I crawled into a ball and cried, ready to die. I heard chuckling from behind the tree. And there He was, I ran ready to kill him. I fell to the ground with a pain so unbearable I wanted to claw my own eyes out. I fought but my power is gone, I’m nothing. He smile at me “this life was quite a bore, I was expecting a little more from you this time.” He said with a happy twinge in his voice. And with a silver dagger came darkness.            
I woke up, sitting straight up in bed; I clawed at the air to fill my lungs. Finally when my breathing steadied I looked around the room to find my grandma rocking in the chair. It was dark by I could see her eyes were fogged over and she wore a smile I’ve never seen her wear before. The first thing I thought of when I saw her was the girl in the exorcist movie. She came and sat at the hedge of my bed. She was tense and cold, I never felt a cold like that before and I shivered.  “Grandma please go turn a light on” I whispered. When she spoke it felt like I never heard her before and she was a complete stranger.
 "I never understood why children such as yourself feel better when they have a nightlight to sleep. Why poor forth light on the monster's face before he kills you, I much rather be in the dark if I was being murdered so I wouldn't feel the need to watch the maroon life force drip forth of my body." My grandmother looks away, her glare in some other world as if she just stepped into some dreadful hell and left me behind to watch her burn. When she looked back at me she bore a smile, lighting up her face as if that dark creature that took hold of her never happened, "good night blue jay!" she said tucking me in and pinching my cheeks.
I couldn’t breathe, I need air.  I opened the french doors to my deck and Asher ran in. He looked around the room as if a ghost just flew in here ready to kill us.
“What the Hell are you doing here!” even now it was hard to resist him. He stormed around the room looking under out the windows and in my closets, he even pulled out one of my bras. I ripped it from him, “stop it! What’s wrong!”
He crossed the room to me, he was feeling my body as if to see if I had some deadly wound that could kill me. “You look shaken up, what happen? Are you okay? He asked.
“Yeah I’m fine, it was just a bad dream now stop touching me.” That was a lie, the tingle and heat I got from when he touched me was amazing and I really didn’t want him to stop. He looked reluctant to let go of me too. But he did and he stepped away from leaning on my door frame.
“Let go for a walk” he said climbing down the tree by my deck.
I walked to the edge of my deck and flicked him off and shut my doors. I then walked to my bed and got a sketch book to draw because I knew I would not be able to fall asleep after that dream and the way my Grandmother acted. Actually there was nothing more that I wanted to do then to go for a walk with Asher, he just made me feel safe but I refuse to give in to him. As I was drawing I noticed and small green turtle on my charm bracelet. The same one from my dream, I guess I just never noticed it before. “Creepy” I murmur into the open room.  


    

Sunday, June 12, 2011

Fallen Cast

This is how I think the cast should look, but most of these people ar probally too old now but it doestn't matter because this is just how I think they shoul look not who they should cast for the movie.

Luce












Daniel












Miles












Roland








Arriane













Molly












Penn












Miss. Sophia












Gabbe












Cam












Shelby

Saturday, June 11, 2011

Sorry

Sorry everyone but I just got out of school so it might be a while til I post the next chapter:'(. I have about half of it done so it will be done in a week or so.

Sunday, June 5, 2011

Cookie from the upcoming chapter;)

"I never understood why children such as yourself feel better when they have a nightlight to sleep. Why poor forth light on the monster's face before he kills you, I much rather be in the dark if I was being murdered so I wouldn't feel the need to watch the maroon life force drip forth of my body." My grandmother looks away, her glare in some other world as if she just stepped into some dreadful hell and left me behind to watch her burn. When she looked back at me she bore a smile, lighting up her face as if that dark creature that took hold of her never happened, "good night Skye!" she said tucking me in and pinching my cheeks.
I totally erased the whole chapter and wrote a new one and once I wrote this I knew I had to share it right away or I would explode. Hope you liked it!

Saturday, June 4, 2011

Chapter 1

San Francisco, CA
Present Day


"Damn it kids your late!" screamed my unforgettable mother, making the whole house shake.


"Coming mom!" my siblings and I yelled back. Shit! No wonder why teachers hate my family, it's the first day of school and my mom and dad forgot to wake us up!


It was time for the morning battle between me and the idiotic triplets Shane, Jake, and Emily as the three demons are called. I peaked my head out the door to see what I was up against this dreadful morning, I saw a head of rich chocolate hair. Jake. He turned around his blue eyes lighting up at the sight of me, and he darted. I ran right after him jumping over dirty clothes as I ran, then he went down in a tangle of legs and teeth. I got this one in the bag. I thought until my brother Shane ripped me down in this massacre.

“Shane you moron!” I yelled at him.
"Awww come on Skyler have some fun!” He replied
All I saw was my sister’s bleached out hair and ice colored contacts kick Jake right in the face then dart head first right into the bathroom, sticking her tongue out at us and kicking the door close. My brothers and I all sat against the wall waiting to go next. I started laughing on how bad my brother, Shane looks in the morning with his tousled blond hair and sleep covered blue eyes, it’s new to me because he always looks so stunning.
“Why are you laughing?” My brothers said simultaneously.
“Because Shane looks terrible!” I said between giggles. It was sort of awkward sitting there with my two brothers in nothing but their plaid boxers. I never really noticed how buff they were getting since they started getting ready for track season.
Jake started to laugh with me, when Shane punched me in my arm. “Your one to talk, look at yourself!”
“Hey! Why did…” my sister interrupted my sentence, she came out wearing a black Victorian dress with a modern twist, black nails, black lipstick, and to top it all off she had raccoon eyes.
Don’t you think that’s…umm a little too fancy for the first day a school” Jake said.
“Don’t you mean a little too demonic” Shane said between grinned lips, and Emily gave her own wicked grin right back.
“I decided to change my look this year” She said smiling has she walked past us.
As soon as she took one step out I ran straight into the bathroom and locked the door, I looked in the mirror and realized that my brother was right on how bad I looked. My hair looked like an untamed animal, I had black rings around my eyes, and my breath stank. It must be all the nightmares I’ve been having.
Just the thought of any of my nightmares sent a shiver down my back. They were all the same, me falling in love with a person or thing that I never get to see in the dream. Then he dies, I run than I get killed under the same polished hand with a silver dagger, each dream taking place in a different era. I was getting used to them now, or what I mean is I don’t wake up screaming anymore.        
After I got out of the shower I put on a violet/purple color dress with one of those really cool belts that were made out of metal with swirls and designs. I also had my charm bracelet that have all my charms on it. All the people that I loved would get me a charm or I would get a charm to at a place that I really liked so I could remember it. It was a family air loom that got past down to me so there are tons of other charms on it from other people in m family, and of course I had my converse on. I have well over twenty pairs of converse, some call it obsession I call it a passion.

See my siblings and I go to an art school that only the best of the best get into. It's called Dreams Academy. I know the name is cheesy but it’s the best. The only way to get in is to be chosen, my siblings and I all got in on a full scholarship. The Elwood family has always been talented artist but we never really became famous. I’m the painter of the family and I would sometimes act depending on the play. While my brothers and my dad are all musicians. My sister is a writer, my mom used to be an actress but now she writes plays.


After we all got out of the showers and we were done shoving food down our throats we left the house as fast as we could. Everyone got into their own cars but me. I had to car pull with Shane, since I don’t turn 16 until next weekend. But I don't mind, he's a good companion.

My brothers each had jeep wranglers, Shane’s was blue and Jake’s was Black. Emily on the other hand had a baby blue Bug, with about five to eight dents and scratches. She is the worst driver I know.
I got in the car and strapped in, we sat in silence most of the time listening to the Stones until we hit a red light.  

"So are you ready for sophomore year Sky?" he asked.


"Another year of teachers hating me, can't wait!" I said sarcastically.


"Well you bring it onto yourself. I mean what was the point of putting birth control pills is Mr. Wilson's tea then sticking a tampon up his butt" he said between laughs.


" Because he's evil! I mean with his fake hair, his old person skin, and ugly shirts."


My brother tried his hardest to laugh but he couldn’t hold it in and he burst out laughing. “I heard he's a sophomore teacher now too" he said between laughs as we were pulling up to school.


"Oh dear God" I whispered under my breath.


We all ran to our classes stuffing book and supplies in our bags, we all laughed when we saw my sister trip and fall. Just another reason why God hates me, I had Mr. Wilson for my homeroom teacher. I tried to walk in as silently as I could while Mr. Wilson was writing something down, until he looked up and gave me a detention slip.


"Your twenty minutes late Miss. Ellwood" he said like he was enjoying it.


"Your twenty minutes late Miss. Ellwood" I repeated in a childish voice.


As I was leaving I heard the snickering of my friends. Which were mostly all guys. I'm glad though, girls are just way too annoying and they gossip way too much. My friends and I are all part of the 'bad ass' group at school. You know the group that goes to Raves, sneaks out at night, well... anything people tell us not to do, we pretty much do. But we aren't druggies or anything like that. Those are just the losers.


And as I was walking out some girl ran in. A girl named Samantha Burns she was a natural ginger so most of the time she gets made fun of but she’s smart so nobody picks on her too much, Mr. Wilson didn't love her but didn't hate her either. Ha! She's going to detention with me, or so I thought.


"Sit down Miss. Burns" he told her.


I stood there open mouthed. I wanted to scream what the hell!


"Leave Miss. Ellwood" Mr. Wilson grunted.


I looked at my friends, and we all had the same devious look on our faces. And on that note I left for an hour worth of detention. As I walked to detention I was planning my revenge. I could do this, oh no I’ll do that, or maybe this.

The detention teacher was Mrs. Kani I've known her since my first day of middle school. She was always the detention teacher and the guidance teacher but she was the most chill teacher ever.
 "What do you have today?" she asked me.

"Detention for being late until second period." I replied.


  “For who? Mr. Wilson?”

“Yeah, who did you think.”
“Oh I don’t know it changes everyday with you. Now go take a seat.”
I'm always the only one in here, but today there was a boy maybe one or two years older than me. He was wearing a rolling stones t-shirt with baggy jeans. But I could tell he had rock solid muscles underneath. He was at least a foot taller than me. Mmm I thought to myself. He had is head down but I could see he wore a grin on his face.

I took a seat next to him pretending to not see him. That lasted a few wild heartbeats. What is this guy doing to me, it feels like I'm a bomb ready to explode. When he did look up and face me, I almost gasped. He was the sexiest guy I've ever seen. He had hair as dark as midnight and gold eyes with swirling colors of red and orange in them, making them look like an ocean sunset. They were the most beautiful eyes I've ever seen, but yet they held a cocky twinge to them.


“The names Asher, and may I ask what your name is.” He said waking me up from this time of bliss.

 “Umm...” I just sat there staring at him like an idiot. “Can you please repeat the question?” He just sat there grinning, as I could hardly breathe.
“What’s your name, precious?”
 “Oh, it's Skyler.”

He turned to face forward, “you know my friend had a dog named Skyler.”

“Excuse me?”
“You heard what I said, my friend had this small, annoying dog named Skyler.” I was really starting to hate this prideful jerk.
“Who the hell do you think you are!”

"I told you I'm Asher, do you want me to be more specific, can your brain handle it" he replied.

“What! Kid I'm seriously about to punch you right now.”

"Shhhhh" Mrs. Kani demanded.


“Asher Holt that's who I am, is that specific enough for you, and  I’m anything but a kid.”

Be a bigger person and ignore him. He's not worth it, even if he is really hot I thought to myself.

"I'm new here think you could show me around?" he asked.


"Oh I'm sorry you said my brain isn't capable to know you full name, then how am I suppose to show you this huge school?" I said sarcastically.

He turned to look at me again with that cocky grin of his, he just shrugged,” you’re probably right.” That was not the answer I was looking for.

Then the bell rang telling us it was second period. I tried to rush out as soon as I could. But that Asher kid caught me by the wrist. He slipped a piece of paper in my hand. He pulled his mouth to my ear, “call me.” He said it in a very seductive voice, I might add.

“In your dreams!” I yelled as he was walking out. He stopped, looked around, and winked at me.

When lunch came Asher was nowhere to be found. Good, I barley whispered.


"What?" My friend Blake said.


"Nothing, so what are we going to do about Mr.Wilson?" I asked. All my friends started to crack up laughing.


"He hates you!" laughed Sarah.


I don't have many friends like my siblings who were the most popular kids at school. But the friends I do have I stick with, I would never stab one of them in the back and they wouldn't stab me in the back.


Blake was my best friend since pre-k, he had dark brown hair, with gray eyes, and he was about a half foot taller than me. Sarah is my only friend that is a girl, she dies her hair a different color every month this month it was blue with pink highlights.

“It’s sort of like punk and pop combined” she said giving me that wide Sarah smile.  She's great.

“Oh my God! Did you see the new guy? I would sure want to....” “Sarah!” Blake interrupted.

 “What? He's hot.”  
“Uhhgg he's a jerk” I moaned, even when I said that I felt a tingle of electricity. What the hell was that, I just ignored it.
“I agree” said Blake.
“What? Oh yeah. So you met him” I said.
“Yea he's too cocky for me.”

“Right! I mean who does he think he is! I mean with his stupid clothes, and his stupid....” I must of been babbling, from the blank looks on my friends faces. Then the Bell rang. Oh great saved by the bell.


The day went on, I got another detention by Miss. Fig for giving her the bird, when it wasn’t even me but the kid behind me. When I got out my brother was nowhere to be seen, I guess my brother already left, looks like I'm taking the bus. When I did get on the bus, just as Blake was going to sit with me, Asher slipped in besides me. He did not look like the type of person to be riding the bus. “What do you want?”

 “To kiss you he replied.” He's just messing with me I thought.
 “Fine then, do it.” He raised his eyebrows,
“What?” he said looking a little surprised.   
“Kiss me.”
“It’s not the right time,” then he just grinned and left my seat. He looked over at Blake, “she’s all yours dude.”

"What was all that about?" Blake asked.


"Nothing" and we were quiet the rest of the ride home. Blake tried to start a conversation by I was too busy thinking.  I probably looked like a moron to Asher now. Why should I care though, he's just another guy. A really hot guy, but who cares.


When I got off the bus so did Asher. “What!” I yelled. He looked over at me, and out of anything that could of happened I blushed. I blushed! I was mentally kicking my ass.


“I bought some land in that farm over there to put my trailer up.” Asher leaned up against a tree. “I guess we'll be seeing a lot of each other, precious.” “

“Wonderful I said between gritted teeth.” He just laughed and walked away.

Thursday, June 2, 2011

The Prologue

"Beings that can only tell the truth are prone to deception."

Ireland
April 13, 1504

My head lay upon his naked shoulder as James wrapped his wings around me. The smoldering fire in the hearth made my crimson hair seem to light up the night. I tried to hide the tear that slipped out of the corner of my emerald green eyes.
James saw it and he gently wiped it away. "Don't worry my love. I wanted to do it. I love you Miss. Alyson Rose Ellwood more than my own place in heaven."

"I love you too" I replied.

"But you will fall" I thought to myself, I dare not say it out loud. The thought just made me cry harder.
 "Shhhhh I've got you" but I could hear the fear in his voice. Not for when the archangels decided to take his wings from him and cast him to the harsh reality of the true world. He was more scared for me. James knew without his wings he could not protect me from Him.

A man that goes by many names in my family, the only man on Earth that can kill me and my protector. And He will kill me. Even though James denies it, I know He will. He always does.

I will miss James so much. I will miss his long, bronze hair and his soft blue eyes. The way he kissed me perfectly and the way it feels to wrapped in his arms. I will even miss him trying to make me go to church. The sound of my own laughter in such at such depressed time was surprising. 


"There we go" James said. "I've always loved your smile." That compliment just made me grin like a fool.

James got tense under my head. "What?" I asked.
"Get your clothes on" he whispered. So now it starts my end. We hurried to get our clothes on when the powerful archangel broke down the door. The archangel looked no older than twenty but it felt like he was older than time.  James took me by the shoulders, "promise me you'll run and never look back."
"But... I said between sobs.
 "Do it!" he almost yelled.

So I did. I ran, to nowhere. I cried, with no tears. This is how it’s going to end, how it always ends. I heard the soft beating of my lover's wings. But I dare not look back, I promised him I would run and never look back. Until the soft song of James wings stopped, I looked back and the look on his face made me gasp, the sorrow in his gaze was like watching a thousand men die.

I ran to him. I heard and saw nothing but him, and the archangels rip his beautiful silk wings out as he tumbled to the ground.

"You monsters" I screamed but it sounded like the faintest whisper you would ever hear. I ran to him as the archangels were leaving. The archangel took one look at me with absolutely no regret or expression on his face, which makes me worry, who really are the good guys? Then my gaze went to James. He was in the poorest of peasant clothes and the two most gruesome scars a mortal could ever see were lining his back.

He was lying on the ground trying to hold in his crying but he wasn’t doing a good job of it and between sobs he kept repeating that he was sorry.

 “Oh my God we need to get you back home and you don’t need to say you’re sorry" I cried.
 “Ah, that would be good, help me up please" he said then winced at the pain." His sobs were dying down now. “I do need to say I’m sorry, I can’t protect you now.”
 “You can always protect me, mortal or immortal” I lied.

He seemed to be too worried on trying to catch a glimpse of Him to notice my lie. I pulled on his jacket to get his attention. I almost started to cry when I saw the love in his eyes; I just hope he can get through this nightmare this time.  "Look at the bright side right now, I mean I'm still alive and you’re alive and we are together. No?" I replied.
 "Yes but..." That's when he got serious. "I know He is coming but I won't let him have you."
"That's what all of them say" I responded.
"But I will protect you even if it means my own life!" But we both knew it was a lie.

That's when the storm started brewing not just in the sky but in my body as well. The roaring sounds of thunder and the fires of lightning rattled my bones. And there He stood less twenty yards away. I tried to use my magic but he drained me of all the power and will I had in my mind and soul. I was useless. I was like a thousand armies stuffed into a box and deprived of all their weapons.

"Run!" I tried to tell James but he was already running towards him. In a second like a flash of lighting James was on the ground in a pile of blood. "No!" I fell to the ground, my legs felt as if they were frozen as ice but yet they were fluid at the same time. I had to pull myself to James. He was only a couple of feet away but yet it felt like an eternity.

As I finally got to him, dropping down to the ground I began to weep. I love you" I cried to him. In the faintest whisper he cried "I’m sorry…"  Then his heart stopped beating and mine broke in two. At that moment I let Him take me. I lay on the ground as He crouched next to me and brought His mouth down to my ear and said "pray for me" in the most devious voice I've ever heard. I had no reply but to close my eyes and remember… nothing. My vision was blinded; my mind blank the world I once lived in was dead. My reason for living was gone. I then let Him take me; I let Him stab me in the heart, with the dreaded silver dagger with the slithering snake riding up the handle. I then felt the sweet release of my heart being put out of its misery.  

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Hi! I'm Victoria Anne and this is my new blog. In my profile I said I am writing a novel but I'm not sure if I should continue since I am so young. So I will be posting at least one chapter per week for all of you to read and give me feed back. But there are a little bit of rules I need to go over. First off I'm posting these for your feed back and you criticizing but I do not encourage you to write anything nasty or cruel. Also please do not copy any of my work, if you are writing a story and need help you can email me at anytime for ideas, and those are the rules. Oh! Another rule, please get as many people as you can to read my blog!:) Before I log off, here is a little taste of the prologue for you "beings that can only tell the truth are prone to deception." Hope you liked it!
                                                                                   Peace, Love, and Rock n' Roll 
Victoria